Quite nicely put together :)
Its way too short. I was expecting the song to rbeak into a melody but it didnt, it was the same, linear sound from begining to end.
If you use this as an intro into something, make it slightly shorter though, it would be great, but as it stands, im not liking it =(
the only reason i submited this before 100% dont was to get some help on what i should add
I like the "dry atmosphere" youve created there.
It sounds industrial like, which is another added bonus as that sound is hard to achieve alongside a good catchy melody.
I'm sure I put less than 8 effort into this song! It went down rather smooth, hahah. This song does have a lot of industrial machine noise to it, as I personally destroyed all of the sounds :)
Thanks for appreciating,
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